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Mary Sue Meme: CounterTale Rachel

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Stolen from tekirikumary sue meme

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NOTE: I rated some as half because it either was irrelevant, was true but not shown just implied, or it's not exactly like it's said here. If you don't like that, don't read.


1. [ ] They are possessed by an angel. 


2. [ ] They are possessed by a demon.


3. [-] They are a werewolf/vampire/faerie. (they are everything, so...)


4. [x] They are physically strong. 


5. [-] They have a rare hair/fur/skin color. (her hair is black with blue...because hair dye and aura, but it wasn't always that way)



6. [ ] Their eyes are an unusual color. (They can change, but they are blue most often.)


7. [ ] This eye color happens to be red. 


8. [-] Their eyes change color. (To be expressive, not to indicate a power.)


9. [ ] They have wings. 


10.[ ] They can grow extra body parts/shapeshift. (she always has a tail, so it's not growing it, it's always there)


11.[-] They are immortal. (It would take a lot to kill them...or the right kind of strike. It could be easy.)


12.[x] They have large boobs. (I wear size 46HHH, so yeah...but I'm also overweight - this is after trimming down.)


13.[ ] They are very muscular.


14.[ ] They are very attractive to the opposite gender. 


15.[x] They are pyrokinetic/etc. (all the powers, so yeah)


16.[x] They have sixth sense/can mind-read/etc. (all powers...)



17.[ ] They have an object of some sort that gives them powers. 


18.[ ] They have a special ability/power, but they don't know about it yet. (lol, she knows)


19.[ ] They were bestowed/cursed with these powers. (nope...not a curse, she's just emotional)


20.[-] They are a healer. (again, all the powers)


21.[ ] They are from a very rich/royal family.


22.[ ] They don't know that they are from a very rich/royal background.


23.[ ] They have lost one/both of their parents.


24.[x] They ran away from home. (kinda, they did run away from somewhere)


25.[ ] Their parents are cruel, uncaring, abusive etc.


26.[ ] They witnessed one/both of their parent's death.


27.[-] They are part angel/demon/faerie/some other mythical creature. (say it with me: everything)


29.[-] They were abused/spoiled as a child. (More like, their parents are dumb and don't know how to 'parent'.)


30.[ ] They are very attractive to the same gender. 


31.[ ] They have lots of friends/no friends. 


32.[ ] They are emo. 


33.[ ] They look much younger/older than they really are. (she looks her age: 24-25)


35.[x] They have lots of morals and declare them a fair bit. (Big yes!)


36.[x] They have a mental disorder. (THIS IS LITERALLY THE BIGGEST OBSTACLE, SO YES!)


37.[x] They have an emotional disorder. (depression, anxiety, Bipolar, Asperger's, ADHD, PTSD, OCD...yeah)


38.[-] They struggle to stay sane. (more like they are emotional, but their morals and peers keep them sane)



39.[ ] They are a psycho.


40.[ ] They have multiple personalities. (more like various parts of one personality, so no)


41.[ ] They are very intelligent. (only in certain areas and 'very' is not the word I would use, because she's not interested in everything and will only pay attention for...a while)


42.[ ] They have hallucinations.


43.[ ] They can summon spirits/demons/angels etc. (she can, but doesn't...so I'm just gonna say no)


44.[ ] They have an unusual/unrealistic pet. (Soul is not a pet)


45.[x] They have a guardian spirit. (Soul, lol)


46.[-] They have a 'special type' of soul. (yes and no, more like because of which Soul she has, it had more power)


47.[ ] Their soul is not the same as them.


48.[ ] They can talk to spirits/ghosts. (irrelevant)


49.[-] Some part of their body glows. (eye can, but only when she wants to convey intent)


50.[ ] They have a rare/unusual name. (Titles are not names, so Esheye Telari does not count)


51.[ ] They were born on an important date, such as New Year's Eve, etc. (is January 25 important?)


52.[ ] They have a twin/sibling(s) that they were separated from at birth/a young age.


53.[ ] They are connected with a certain element. (again, connected to everything)


54.[ ] They are connected with a certain animal. (um...no.)


55.[-] They always dress like a certain 'label'. (I like Avatar Korra's last outfit. Does this count as a 'label'?)


56.[ ] They look quite a bit like a character from a popular anime/manga. (no...she looks like me, cuz she is me)


65.[ ] They are very mysterious/dark.


66.[ ] They are very lively/happy.


67.[x] Their mood changes a lot/very quickly. (bipolar and adhd, yo)


68.[ ] They are very patient. 


69.[ ] They are from a long line of assassins.


70.[x] They have a piece of jewelry/clothing that they always wear. (necklace and ring)


71.[ ] They have amnesia. [i don't think lack of memory of resets count as amnesia]


72.[ ] The have some sort of harmful curse upon them. 


73.[x] They are involved in some sort of prophecy. (kinda...sure.)


74.[-] They are 'the chosen one'. (That word has never been used,but...)


75.[ ] They have insomnia. 


Total: 18 points (I think I got that right.)



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Take points off your character's overall score if they fit any of the following statements- 



1. [ ] They smoke. (nooooooooooo!)

2. [ ] They are an alcoholic. (nooooooooooo!)

3. [-] They are overweight. (They were originally)

4. [ ] They are addicted to drugs. (nooooooooooo!)

5. [x] They have a short temper. 

6. [-] They enjoy bullying others. (For justice sake, or for trolling...so kinda)

7. [-] They do not care much about others. (Only when she is at her lowest, which isn't abnormal)

8. [ ] They are relatively emotionless. (lol no)

9. [-] They have some sort of permanent medical condition. (Does psychological count?)

Total: -3

FINAL: 15

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Your point score:

5: Anti-Sue. Your character may be a bit on the boring side. Of course, this does depend, but generally if they score that low, it wouldn't hurt to 'spice them up' a bit. 


6-15: Balanced Character. If your character scored around here, then they are probably quite a well-balanced and interesting character. Those scoring in the higher end of this category may be a bit too much though. 


16-25: Borderline Mary-Sue. We have a problem. You need to tone your character down. They are most likely a bit annoying to others, too. (YES HE'S THE MOST ANNOYING PLS TONE DOWN SHITLOAD GOD DAMN)


26: Mary-Sue. Please revise your character... NOW.




I tag...everyone.
I was bored.

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